Everyone said we were crazy.
“Just wait a few years.”
“Get it out of your system.”
“You won’t be able to do that with a baby.”
But the truth is—we didn’t want to wait.
Hiking has always been our thing. The way we reconnect, the place where life feels slower, simpler. So when our daughter was born, we decided: if we could carry her into this world, we could carry her up a mountain.
We planned everything. Packed smart. Trained with weighted gear. Found a trail with manageable elevation and lots of shade. People stared when we stepped onto the path with baby bottles clipped to our backpacks—but we were used to that.
And honestly? She slept most of the way up. A little trail angel, bundled against my husband’s chest, breathing softly while the wind whispered through the trees.
Halfway up, the air started to change. It wasn’t just the coolness of the higher altitude. There was something else—a strange, electric feeling, as though the mountain itself was speaking to us.
I glanced at my husband, Mark, and he caught my eye with that knowing look we always exchanged when something felt… off. But we shrugged it off. We were experienced hikers, and the trail was easy enough. A few more hours, and we’d be at the summit, where we’d take in the view and enjoy the calm.
But as we neared the summit, things started to feel different. The path grew steeper, and the trees thinned out, revealing jagged rocks and a more barren landscape. The wind picked up, colder now, biting at our exposed skin. We noticed the change, but it didn’t stop us. We were close.
Then, the strangest thing happened.
As we crested the final ridge, the view in front of us wasn’t what we expected. We had hiked this trail before, years ago, and we knew the landscape well—the same grand views of distant valleys, rolling hills, and the neighboring peaks.
But this time, the valley below was shrouded in mist, a thick, swirling fog that seemed to rise from the earth itself. It wasn’t natural. It moved with a strange fluidity, like it was alive. Mark stopped in his tracks, his hand instinctively going to Isla’s carrier. He adjusted her a little more carefully, his eyes narrowing as he scanned the landscape.
“What the hell is that?” he murmured.
I felt a chill creep down my spine. “I don’t know. It wasn’t here before.”
We had made it to the summit, but now, a palpable unease settled over us. The view was unsettling, too distant and too unclear. The land felt foreign, as though the mountain was holding its secrets close, denying us the familiarity we had come to expect.
We set up a small camp just off the trail, a little way away from the edge of the summit. We figured the mist would pass. But the longer we stayed, the stronger the odd feeling grew. Mark tried to brush it off, pulling out our baby gear and setting up a small spot for Isla to rest, but I couldn’t shake the feeling that something was wrong.
And then, just as we were settling in, we heard it.
A low, almost inaudible hum, coming from the mist below. It was faint at first, but it grew louder, more distinct. The kind of sound you might hear if you were standing too close to a large mechanical engine, but it didn’t feel mechanical. It felt… ancient, like something was stirring beneath the earth.
Mark froze, his hands pausing mid-motion as he adjusted the sleeping bag for Isla.
“Did you hear that?” he whispered.
I nodded, my throat tight. “What the hell is that?”
We were both silent, straining to hear more. The hum continued, but it wasn’t just sound now. I could feel it—vibrating through the ground beneath me, sending tremors through my feet.
Mark looked at me, his eyes wide. “We need to go.”
But I hesitated, looking at Isla, whose peaceful face had turned to a soft frown. There was no way I could bring myself to leave just yet.
“We can’t,” I said quietly, the words escaping my mouth before I even realized what I was saying. “We’ve come this far. It’s just a weird noise. It’ll pass.”
But Mark wasn’t so sure. His eyes darted toward the mist below, then back to me. “We’re not alone up here,” he said, his voice barely a whisper. “I feel it. Something is… watching us.”
I shook my head, trying to push the feeling of panic away. I wanted to believe that it was nothing, just our imaginations running wild. But the atmosphere had shifted, and I couldn’t ignore the unease settling in my chest.
Just then, Isla began to cry.
It wasn’t a typical cry. It wasn’t the kind of hunger or discomfort cry that we had gotten so used to hearing. This was different—sharp and terrified, as though she sensed something we couldn’t. Her little fists clenched and unclenched, her tiny body wriggling in the carrier.
“Isla,” I whispered, trying to comfort her, but the more I spoke, the louder her cries became, and the hum from below grew in intensity, matching the panic in my chest.
“Let’s go,” Mark said again, more urgently this time, his hands already packing up the gear.
I didn’t argue. I didn’t need to. There was no reason to stay. The mountain, once a place of solace, now felt hostile, like it was pushing us away. We gathered our things quickly, trying to calm Isla, but she wouldn’t stop crying.
As we turned to leave, something caught my eye—something I hadn’t noticed before. A figure, standing just inside the mist. It was tall and still, like it was waiting for us to notice.
I blinked, and the figure was gone.
Mark didn’t see it. He was focused on Isla, his back turned to the summit, hurrying down the trail. But my heart raced. There was no mistaking it. Someone—or something—had been standing there.
We didn’t stop. We moved faster now, our hearts pounding, as the mountain felt like it was closing in on us. The hum, too, began to fade, slowly, as we descended.
When we reached the base of the mountain, we paused to catch our breath, our legs aching from the descent. Isla’s cries had finally stopped, though her face was pale and her eyes wide with confusion.
“What was that?” Mark asked, his voice strained, as though he was trying to rationalize everything that had just happened.
“I don’t know,” I said, my voice trembling. “But whatever it was… it didn’t want us there.”
We drove home in silence, the weight of the experience hanging between us. What had we encountered? What had made Isla react so strongly? Was it just our minds playing tricks on us, or had we stumbled upon something we weren’t meant to find?
As the days passed, I couldn’t stop thinking about the figure I’d seen—or rather, the way it had made me feel. There was something ancient, something powerful in the air that day. I still don’t know what it was, but I do know one thing:
Sometimes, the places we love the most—the ones that bring us peace and joy—are also the places that hold the deepest secrets.
And sometimes, it’s better not to uncover them.
The karmic twist? I now believe that Isla’s heightened sensitivity that day was more than just coincidence. She sensed something we couldn’t. In a way, it was a warning—one that saved us from going deeper into something unknown. She had led us back, even though we didn’t realize it at the time.
And that, in itself, felt like a gift—a reminder that, sometimes, the answers we need are found not by pushing forward, but by listening to the signs around us.
So, if you ever find yourself questioning your instincts or the things you feel in your gut—trust them. There’s a reason you’re feeling that way, and sometimes, the best thing to do is listen and walk away.
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